This paper is a proposal for my dissertation for the PhD in Law. I have already written ten pages but the admission committee told me to make some material changes on it. the changes should be made are as following: 1- Focus on one specific area of law 2- Do not focus on theory 3- Make your writing legal and fact based 4- The current draft is heavy in literature review (what 5- 5- conclusions are you making from reviewing the literature and how will you support these conclusions) Your writing focuses on case study when case studies should be used to support legal theories. 6- Overall, heavier legal analysis.