Make two body paragraphs about the book “I am Malala”
1. Post two body paragraphs you have written for Essay #2. These should be paragraphs which you feel
need the most improvement. Try selecting two that seem to have issues with the “flow” of your analysis and
thoughts. You can attach these paragraphs as a separate file or copy and paste them into the text box.
2. Ask two specific questions for your peers to answer regarding your paragraphs.
*In your responses to your peers, review their body paragraph structure (AXES) and offer advice on how to
improve the structure, as well as addressing their questions.