Once you’ve familiarized yourself with the case background and documents, complete the assignment
below. Your instructor will tell you how he or she would like you to submit your work. If your instructor
wishes, do this assignment in a collaborative team. Otherwise, do it on your own.
1. Review Chapter 6 and study Dr. Juneja’s email. For each of the five points he makes, identify a passage
in the original draft that could be improved as he describes. Revise each of the five passages according to
his suggestions. For example, the first point in his email refers to the title of the draft. Revise the title to
reflect his suggestion.
2. Perform any necessary research to learn more about 3D printing, and then revise Document 6.1 to
improve its coherence. Focus on the title, the headings, lists, and paragraphs (including topic sentences,
adequate support, and transitional words and phrases).
Reflecting on Your Work
Once you’ve completed your assignment, write a reflection about your work using the prompt below.
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Return to one of the sources you consulted as you further researched 3D printing. Examine how effectively
this source emphasizes important information. In the box below, explain the ways in which this source
follows or strays from the principles of emphasis and coherence covered in the chapter. In presenting
information about 3D printing, did any of your sources inspire ideas about how you might improve the
organization and development of your own draft? How so?